Blurbs ready to go?

Thank you for the FB feedback on my blurbs. I incorporated a number of suggestions, so this is what I have now. What do you think? I'm so close to have everything ready for this release.

BLURB

A brand new, gripping novel of romantic suspense from New York Times and USA Today bestselling author Dana Marton.

When an American teenager disappears abroad, Clara Roberts, a by-the-book investigator on a secret mission, joins forces with Light Walker, an ex-SEAL turned lawless mercenary, to save her. The sparks they generate—and the trouble they stir up—threaten to set the jungle ablaze. Nothing is what it seems in this fast-paced romantic thriller. As attraction grows into love, looming danger turns into all-out war, and the whole region explodes around them. Clara and Walker must hold on to each other and race against time to survive.

SHORT BLURB

When an American teenager disappears abroad, a by-the-book investigator on a secret mission joins forces with an ex-SEAL turned lawless mercenary to save her. The sparks they generate—and the trouble they stir up—threaten to set the whole jungle ablaze. Nothing is what it seems in this fast-paced romantic thriller.

BLURB FOR TWITTER

When an American teen disappears in Mexico, a by-the-book investigator teams up with a lawless mercenary to rescue her.

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I'd appreciate any feedback. 

And dont' forget the...

CONTEST!!! --I'll be posting all kinds of bits and pieces, leading up to the Nov. 10th release date. Don't forget to comment here on the blog to the posts. I'll be raffling off a signed set of Hardstorm Saga (Reluctant Concubine + Accidental Sorceress)on release day among the commenters. GOOD LUCK!

(Must be 18 to enter. Void where prohibited. All raffle rules apply.)